Consequences: A Cautionary Pride and Prejudice Variation, by C. P. Odom – A Review

Consequences, by C. P. Odom (2013)From the desk of Kimberly Denny-Ryder:

Life is a series of calculations, steps, and decisions that make up all of our experiences. What would happen if we had the ability to see how certain decisions affected the rest of our lives? Would we willingly change our fate and the fates of others or would we follow our instincts? C.P. Odom explores these questions in his latest Pride and Prejudice variation, Consequences.

We often see the consequences of Elizabeth Bennet’s choices in a different light via Pride and Prejudice retellings. In Consequences we find her rejecting Mr. Darcy’s first proposal at the Hunsford Parsonage, only to set forth a series of events she could not possibly have imagined. This fateful decision affects not only her own path but the lives and livelihood of her entire family, with shocking final results. Of course, Elizabeth could not possibly have known that one single decision could have such a lasting impact on her life; but would reflecting on the potential outcome change her decision? C.P. Odom shows us how one single point in the seemingly endless parade of decisions in one’s life can have such a visceral impact on the paths we travel.

Every so often a book will come along that has the ability to take us on a wild emotional ride. Consequences is just such a book. I’m still reeling from the extreme emotions that this book was able to incite within me. There were times that the writing was so moving that I had to put the book down and just reflect for a bit. Odom is certainly a person who understands the depths of the human condition. The inner musings that Elizabeth and Darcy experience throughout the book are extremely reflective, and in my opinion certainly resemble the inner turmoil they must have felt in Austen’s original work. There were times that the writing got a bit depressing (the first half of the book in particular), but I was pleased to see the events turn around enough to lift my spirits in the end.

Consequences may very well be one of the most unique variations on Pride and Prejudice that I’ve ever read. It’s difficult to write about why the book is unique without giving away what makes it so special. So instead of ruining it let’s just say – the beginning of Part II of the book will absolutely surprise, astound, and shock you.

It’s also refreshing to see Elizabeth and Darcy’s story written through a male author’s perspective. Prior to reading this, I’d only ever read one other male JAFF (Jane Austen Fan Fiction) author’s work by Jack Caldwell. I think that in most retellings/variations/what-ifs I’ve read, the majority of the blame for the multiple misunderstandings between Elizabeth and Darcy is placed on Darcy. And while I agree that he is at fault for his haughty behavior, I also know Elizabeth is just as responsible for misjudging him. Odom writes the inner thoughts of Darcy and Elizabeth very self-reflectively. They both realize the errors of their previous actions and take pains to make amends. Moving, deep, and thought-provoking, Consequences is a unique reading experience you’re really going to want to go on and on.

5 out of 5 Stars

Consequences: A Cautionary Pride and Prejudice Variation, by C. P. Odom
Meryton Press (2013)
Trade paperback (284) pages
ISBN: 978-1936009305

Cover image courtesy of Meryton Press © 2013; text Kimberly Denny-Ryder © 2014,

17 thoughts on “Consequences: A Cautionary Pride and Prejudice Variation, by C. P. Odom – A Review

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  1. This is on my TBR list and this is the second review I have read.After reading this review I think I need to push it to the top of my list! Great review


  2. Yes, I agree with you. It was a very different variation — and, as so, it is sooo tempting to give hints. I’ll just say that Mr. Odom did turn my tears to smiles.


  3. I read this quite awhile back at the Pemberly Reading Room, which is a great place! Having read it I went back again and again to read all of the stories there by “Colin”. I have searched for more by this author and I am so pleased to see the publishing of this book. I found myself several nights sitting at the computer to read and cry when I discovered this story. Even now I feel so emotional when I think of it. At the time male/female perspective was lost in the depth and grace of the writing. This book will draw you in and not let go until the very end. It belongs on everyones TBR list and maybe should move toward the top. I know it is on my TBRA list.


    1. I can’t wait to hear from you after re-reading the published novel. It’s so much tighter and authentic to Austen’s original masterpiece and time. Colin did such a great job on improving his already amazing work.


  4. I am thrilled you were moved by this novel, Kim. It has been one of my favorites since the on-line days but love love love that Meryton Press published it. It’s a story that stays with you long after the last satisfying page. Colin’s Consequences will make you weep. Then, weep for joy!


  5. Kimberly, your review was most gracious and encouraging. If I was able to evoke those responses and emotions from you, I feel incredibly rewarded. This was originally my third effort when writing fan fiction a number of years ago, it’s my second book to actually be really published, and I have others which I hope to someday see the light of day. Cheers, Colin.


  6. This does indeed sound like a must read… What does it mean to be a “Cautionary” variation? It serves as a warning? That does sound a bit ominous! It will have a happy ending won’t it?? :-)


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