Forbidden, by Syrie James and Ryan M. James – A Review

From the desk of Christina Boyd:

Look out, Alyson Noel. Make way, Becca Fitzpatrick. Heads up, Lauren Kate.  There is a spectacular new Young Adult (YA) writing team on the horizon! 

Forbidden, authored by a mother and son writing team is their debut supernatural novel chocked full of intrigue, romance and humor.  But whyever is a Jane Austen blog site reviewing such a book?  One with not even a mention of Mr. Darcy, nor a reference to Jane Austen, nor anything remotely Regency? Simply thus.  One of the authors, none other than the international best-selling author of The Lost Memoirs of Jane Austen as well as the award winning The Secret Diaries of Charlotte Bronte, Syrie James, along with her son, Ryan M. James, ventures to offer us a larger allowance of prose to our daily study.

High school sophomore, Claire Brennan is tired of constantly moving from city to city.  Every time she seems to put down roots, her paranoid, seemingly hippie mother decides to pull up stakes and start anew.  New city.  New school.   But here at Emerson Academy, in the posh Brentwood, California community, not only does Claire love her prestigious school and value the scholarship she has worked these last two years to maintain but also her two bosom buddies, Erica and Brian, whom she shares everything with.  So who can blame her for not telling her mother about her newly discovered psychic powers and the visions warning her of imminent peril?  Then there is Alec MacKenzie, new man on campus with the exotic Scottish accent and handsome good looks.  Who is he?  After he somehow saves them from being crushed by falling scaffolding… his story of being orphaned at an early age, lived all over the world with various relations and most recently emancipated from a rich uncle… seems more and more sketchy, putting Claire and her friends on high alert. 

Even if you can explain away all those other things, the fact is, I saw those platforms hover for a moment in mid-fall before being tipped, I’m telling you, Alec held them up – somehow –  with his mind, and he made them fall to the side.  He may not be a vampire, but he’s… I don’t know… telekinetic.” (87)

What Claire doesn’t know is Alec is a Grigori, an earthly angel bound to watch and sometimes eliminate the descendants of his angelic forefathers, and chose Emerson Academy to hide from those duties, living amongst the humans as one of them.

So, when you hugged – did you feel Alec’s heartbeat?  Claire stifled a laugh.  She looked at Brian from her seat and nodded emphatically, patting her chest one-handed with a rapid drumbeat.  He grinned triumphantly and made his hand for her to turn the note over.  She did. It read: See. Told you. He’s not a vampire.” (118) 

Who would have thought Alec would end up falling in love with Claire, a newly Awakened Nephilim, a half angel, a Halfblood… one whose very existence is forbidden.

At first Alec appears aloof, but his demeanor improves on acquaintance. 

Claire could feel the heat emanating from his body.  Suddenly, all she could think about was that moment in her dream when he’d almost kissed her.  He was looking at her now in the same way.  The fear and doubt she’d been harboring began to trickle away.  Whoever Alec was –whatever he was –Claire realized she wouldn’t mind if he did kiss her.” (157)

As the two discover each other, as Claire learns about her heritage and her newly discovered powers, the stakes rise and are no longer about first kisses and crushes.  “If there entire relationship was against Grigori law, what would happen if they pursued it?” (211)   It seems others have discovered her existence now and the hunt is on.  Alec vows to protect her from those he is escaping as well as The Fallen, the evil ones he has hunted for a century. 

…what are you going to do?  Turn me into your hangman committee?  Have me executed?”  “That’s what I should do.”  Vincent finished off his wine and sighed.  “But Alec has begged me to reconsider.  It seems you’ve become so important to him, he’s willing to put many lives at risk.  So we’ve made a deal.” (307)

If this all seems familiar, as in “We can’t be together… I’ll hurt you,” Bella and Edward from Stephenie Meyer’s Twilight saga; or the mysterious, handsome teenage boy romances the odd girl with new found powers, Ever and Damen from Alyson Noel’s Immortals series; or girl falling in love with angel protector with Fallen angels all about them, Nora and Patch from Becca Fitzgerald’s Hush Hush series and Daniel and Luce from Lauren Kate’s Fallen series… I can promise you it’s not a copycat novel. Yes, there may be similarities but I interpreted it as part of the genre and following angel lore. It was very much about trust, discovery, and love. I totally enjoyed this. I was entertained by the inspired prose, witty dialogue, the humorous actions and reactions, and of course, the honest, pure character development.  The ending will leave you not quite hanging off a cliff by your fingernails… but I assure you, I look forward to James and James next installment. This may be written for Young Adults, however, might I also suggest, for the young at heart?

4 out of 5 Stars


BOOK INFORMATION

  • Forbidden, by Syrie James & Ryan M. James
  • Harper Teen (2012)
  • Trade paperback (416) pages
  • ISBN: 978-0062027894
  • Genre: Young Adult Fiction, Contemporary Paranormal

ADDITIONAL INFO | ADD TO GOODREADS

We received a review copy of the book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. Austenprose is an Amazon affiliate. Cover image courtesy of Harper Teen © 2012; text Christina Boyd © 2013, austenprose.com. Updated 6 March 2022.

11 thoughts on “Forbidden, by Syrie James and Ryan M. James – A Review

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  1. So beautifully done, Christina. You write these like you’ve done more than a couple of them! I must confess the only work I have read by Syrie James is the short story in JAMMDI. I must remedy this. A mother/son team. Is that great or what? I am totally impressed. If my son and I collaborated on a piece of fiction it would be a train wreck entitled Cormac McCarthy Meets Jane Austen. Now THAT gives me the heebie-jeebies….

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  2. I have read most of Syrie James’ work and love her writing. I cannot wait to read what mother and son have accomplished together.

    Thank you for the share!

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  3. Given that I just recently read and LOVED Syrie James’ book “The lost memoirs of Jane Austen”, I think I’ll be giving this a try. Putting it on my “to read” list right now ;)

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  4. Jeffrey, if you have yet to read Syrie James but paranormal YA doesn’t seem to be your cup of tea — you must read her Jane Austen and Charlotte Bronte fictional memoirs. AMAZING. Both even made me sob! I am ever amazed to read anything created by a team — I just can’t imagine how it is done. But James and James seem to do it seemlessly! BRAVA

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    1. I agree!! I haven’t read the Charlotte Bronte story, but I did recently read “Lost memoirs of Jane Austen” & it was fabulous!! I read it in one day… less than a day, actually! LOL I couldn’t put it down! It is a “MUST READ” if you love Austen!! :)

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