From the desk of Jeffrey Ward:
Would Jane Austen love reading this book today? She admired Sir Walter Scott, Frances Burney, and Maria Edgeworth but what about this epic regency romantic adventure encompassing some 1,500 pages? Within its sweeping span are familiar elements of the gothic in her Northanger Abbey, the ironic humor in Emma, overcoming class barriers in Pride and Prejudice, the romantic treacheries of Mansfield Park, the familial loyalty of Sense and Sensibility, and the steadfast endurance of love in Persuasion. Yes, dear Jane, I think you would!
The “persuader” is larger-than-life hero Edmund Percy who fits the description because he is aptly tall, strong, and handsome. But what elevates him to heroic status is his unique melding of courage, insightful intellect, persuasiveness, humility, and a loving generous heart. The youngest son of a landed gentleman, he has dedicated himself to the clergy.
It is 1810 and his father asks him to temporarily suspend his clerical studies and sail to Antigua to rescue his failing sugar plantation. There, he encounters exhaustive work and intolerable slavery conditions, but ultimately Janetta, the exotically beautiful mulatto daughter of a cruel neighboring slave master. Wild and unpredictable, the slaves fear her bewitching power. Edmund falls madly in love and a torrid erotic relationship ensues, but he is torn by guilt and lost virtue. The supernatural scene of Edmund being confronted by Janetta over a chilling vision only she can see but neither can understand is the story’s ultimate mystery:
“No,” she said bitterly. “I see this woman – I see this dark queen; and you will love her more than you ever loved me.” He laughed and tried to take her in his arms, but she would not let him; she evaded his embrace and slipped away from him. “You will love her more than me! “she said angrily. “Who is this woman? Janetta!” he said soothingly. “Do not be silly, I know no queen; nor is it likely I ever shall. You are the one I love…” (307)
Only Janetta is aware of the hopelessness of their love and she accurately predicts their ultimate separation. At the loss of his first love, heart-broken Edmund returns to England. On that return voyage, he becomes a notable English hero as he prevents an American privateer from boarding and capturing the ship he is on. This action proves pivotal to his future.
Edmund confesses his sins to his mentor and is still encouraged to take up the clergy. Seeking a living, he travels to Hampshire to visit Andromeda, his beloved aunt, and mother-figure. She describes the most noble, wealthy, and powerful family in the area—the Esquith De Foyes—and strongly warns him to avoid at all costs their untouchable daughter Mariah and her companion, the lovely but enigmatic Elizabeth Brownton, who manifests an autism-spectrum syndrome. Yet, at a ball, the inevitable happens as he meets the entire family. Mariah is regal, impossibly beautiful, and brilliant of mind, and like Edmund, gifted with a supremely compassionate heart. Edmund also meets Mariah’s brother and family heir Tarquin Esquith De Foye. Reckless, competitive, and fiercely protective, “Tark” and Edmund become closer than brothers. The family has learned of Edmund’s high-sea heroics and motions are put into place to award him a living as temporary rector in their village church.
Mariah’s compassion and Edmund’s exceptionally persuasive gifts improve the lives of everyone within their sphere of influence, and they become more than just a friendly partnership. Yet, in spite of their growing love for each other, Edmund cannot persuade Mariah to marry him and is unaware that she is none other than the prophesied “dark queen!” Her own deeply-hidden secret prevents her marriage and will eventually turn deadly enough to threaten her entire family if Edmund fails in his quest to uncover it.
With a half-million words to work with, all of the characters are so totally and fully fleshed out that I found myself weeping over their misfortunes, laughing with their moments of merriment, and hoping beyond hope for their happy future. Yes, there are places in the story that may plod for some readers, such as an entire chapter describing a fox hunt, the intricacies of chess games, and side-plots drawn out in the minutest detail. Yet, soaring above all and not-to-be-missed is what I consider to be the most magnificent unconsummated love story I’ve read since Jane Eyre. In attempting to compare the romantic grandeur and Gothic underpinnings of Edmund Persuader, only Charlotte Bronte’s masterpiece comes to mind. Don’t be intimidated by its length. The determined reader will seldom encounter a more soul-satisfying reward for the effort.
5 out of 5 Stars
Edmund Persuader: A Romance, by Stuart Shotwell
Mermaid Press of Maine (2009)
Trade paperback (1555) pages
Cover image courtesy of Mermaid Press © 2009; text Jeffrey Ward © 2013, Austenprose.com
To complete such a monumental work of 1500 pages deserves a round of applause Jeffrey. Well done.
I just realized when I re-read your review that you removed the mention that the Bertrams of Mansfield Park are Edmund’s neighbors in Antigua. That was a brilliant connection by the author. It gives Austen readers a better idea of the conditions of the sugar plantation that they were involved with.
Thanks for this excellent review. One, if not your finest effort.
Thank you Laurel Ann for your encouragement. Similar to Jane Eyre, I can pick up this book at almost any point and get so much additional enjoyment out of it.
Sounds like a great read. Thanks for the heads up!
After I read your review, I looked for the book on Amazon and, to my amazement, it was FREE! Naturally, I bought it on the spot. Its length is a bit daunting (I thought my War and Peace days were long over) but it’s worth a try. Thanks for the entertaining review.
I got my Nook copy for free too Ruth. The author has been very generous with this book, tempting readers to give it a try. Jeffrey loved it. I look forward to reading it this summer.
Laurel Ann, how did you get your copy for Nook. I just tried and it only shows the paperback on the B&N website. I’d even pay some for it. Help!!!
Hi Maggie, I downloaded my copy directly from the author’s website. I do not see the e-pub version listed there any longer, nor on B&N. I wrote to the author and asked when they would be available again. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Dear readers, this review is just the tip of the iceberg! There is SO MUCH going on in this grand read it is impossible to go into any detail. I could have spent 750 words on the incredible side-heroine Elizabeth Brownton alone. I have never encountered a character remotely like her in all of fiction.
Is there a source for information about the author? There is an interview with him on the publisher’s website but I can’t find anything else.